Thursday, September 29, 2011

BOOK REVIEW: MATCHED

Title: Matched
Author: Ally Condie
Number of Pages: 366
Number of Stars I'm Giving: 1.5


Give me a B,
Give me an O,
Give me an R,
Give me an ING,
What does that spell???
Matched.

I have to write this review before I go to book club tonight, or else my opinion might become skewed!  
Before I begin bashing this book, I will say 3 good things about it.
#1 - It has a nice cover.
#2 - The language and content are 99% clean.
#3 - The concept of this book was interesting (although not too original).

I don't have a real big issue with this plot not being original.  Many very good books have basically the same story line.  It just seems that some authors can pull off the same story line much better than others...think Jane Austen.  Ally Condie was a former English teacher.  If I were to score her on this book, I would give her a D.  Sure everything was spelled correctly, but shouldn't an English teacher know that a plot needs to have 3 things?  A beginning, a middle, and an end.  She must have gotten really caught up in the beginning because this book NEVER moves past it.  You could have compressed this entire book into about 5 chapters and then added a really good story on the end of it.  There was very little conflict in the book and there was zero conflict resolution.  When the highlight of the book consists of people walking up the same hill over and over again and writing in the dust with sticks, you know it's not the most exciting book on the planet.  The author gave no reasons why the characters love each other.  She just tells you they do and you are supposed to care about them after that.  Cassie, the main character comes across as selfish.  Anyone who has any kind of affair can only be described as selfish.  The thing I hated most about this book was the author kept alluding to Cassie rebelling against the society.  She never did.  Not even once.  She thought about it, but she was never brave enough to do it.  No one rebelled in this book.  
They all just rolled over and did whatever they were told.
  
This book leaves so many questions unanswered.
Who were they at war with?
Who were the leaders of this society?
If they were so technologically and physically advanced, why were they losing the war?
If they were truly losing the war, why didn't the civilians in the society see more signs of war?
Was there a food shortage?
Why did Xander forgive Cassie when he knew she was having an affair?
How did Cassie's dad, mom, official, and Xander know that she loved Ky?
Why was everyone portrayed as being happy in the society?
Why were they cutting down all of the trees?
Why did they take everyone's artifacts away?
Why wear a beautiful dress to meet your match if they can only see you from the waist up?
Why did matched couples have to have an escort on a date, 
but "singles" could whomever they wanted at anytime?  
Did they sterilize everyone they didn't want to reproduce or did they practice abortions routinely?
What would the society do to a baby born to 2 perfectly healthy parents if it had a defect? 
If Cassie was the best sorter, why didn't the society keep her when they sent her family away?
What the heck is a sorter?  And why does the society need sorters when there are computers?
Why can Cassie read, but doesn't know how to write letters?
How dumb is Casie if it took her a long time to learn how to write the letter K?
What did Xander and Ky see in Cassie anyways?
If Xander really loved Cassie then why was it so easy for him to let her go?
How can grown men be expected to pull off names like Xander and Ky?
(Ooops, sorry that's just an opinion of mine.  They are great names for 10 year olds though!)
Since when is 80 considered a hard age to achieve? 

Why, why, why didn't Cassie ever rebel???

I am getting pretty annoyed with these book series being written simply because the author hopes it will become a movie or an easy series to sell to a mindless group of teenagers so that he/she can make millions of dollars.  Where have our societies expectations of quality gone?!?

Like any good totalitarian society all religion was cut from these peoples lives. Freedom was exchanged for the illusion of security.  And the society trained people to do and not to think.  The society demonized and removed any people who disagreed with their view of perfection.
Sadly I see much of this happening in our society today.  I realize this book was science fiction, but I felt it was a coming reality as I was reading it.  So that is my 2 or 3 cents on this book.  If you choose to read it, don't worry it won't waste too much of your time because it is so simply written.  Just don't expect an exciting story about rebelling against an oppressive government.

Sunday, September 18, 2011

Isabelle's Jr. Blue Belt Test

Isabelle had her Jr. Blue belt test yesterday.
Each test I get more nervous for her but she does better every time!

Every testing her technique becomes more difficult and starting with this test she had new requirements.
Here's a breakdown of everything she had to pass off:
Kicking combinations  - there are 2,
Form - for this test she had 18 steps in her form,
One step sparring - there are 2,
Sparring - while she is getting better, she has along way to go in terms of power,
Nunchukas - she did great this time,
Mental training - she had 4 questions,
and last but most fun - breaking technique!

 This is Isabelle doing her Sr. Green belt form.
She always gets so excited for her trophy!

Jee Hoon was tesing for his Red/Black belt.
Up next for him is black belt!
 If Isabelle keeps trying as hard as she has been
 she will get her black belt when she is 7.

If she sticks with Taekwondo,
(both myself and her dad are somewhat pushy in this matter),
she could be a full fledged master by the time she is 16.

I am so proud of you Isabelle.
Not because you are reaching higher "ranks" but because
you work hard and remain determined you are becoming 
a person with a strong character.
Keep up the good work in ALL that you do!

Friday, September 16, 2011

St. George 2011

This week the kids and I made the trek down to St.George. Mom and Dad were already down there so we went to hang out for a few days.  The main reason for our trip was we wanted to see the Little Mermaid at Tuacahn. I am planning on making this an annual Mommy/Daughter date.  It was so much fun!
The show was great. Our seats were on the front row so the actors were literally 5 feet away from us.  They had the water come down a river in the mountain and flood the stage to make the ocean.  Isabelle was in awe the entire show.  A couple of actors even came off stage during one of the songs and got Isabelle and took her to dance with her.  At that moment she got pretty shy - but she LOVED it!  Sadly I have no pictures at Tuacahn.  We can't wait to go back again next year!

On Tuesday we went to a couple of parks and had a blast.
These chairs are so fun.  
I think I want some on my front porch for when you have
neighbors come over to sit!
 St. George has funner parks than up here, and that's a fact.

 Every time I do trips down here I want to move down.  It may happen one day.  
I love the perfect mix of small town with all the stores I love.


 Dad had to get in on the fun too!  
He's carrying on the Grandpa Cain legacy wonderfully!
After the park we went to a water park downtown.  
 This splash park was so well thought out.  It even had lovely shady places for 
parents and grandparents to sit, we really appreciated that.
After the water park we went on this beautiful carousel.


We stumbled upon the Frog Prince.

I guess he's looking for a different princess.
 It was worth a try...

Isabelle just kept saying "St. George has the coolest things!  I love it here!"

I do to.  We loved our trip but we loved coming back home to daddy too.
Hopefully next year we can do it all again!

Thursday, September 1, 2011

1st Day of "Away" School

Isabelle had her first day of "school" today.
We have home schooled her for two years, but this was the first time I dropped her off almost anywhere.
Needless to say it was a little nerve racking for me!
Here we are dropping off in the morning.  The sun was in her eyes - can you tell?
 Unlike most elementary schools she switches teachers and rooms a few times.
Today she only went to one wrong class, so that's good news!
When I picked her up she couldn't stop talking about how much she loved everything.
She will be attending Harmony every Thursday and then we will continue homeschooling her the rest of the week. 
One of her classes is violin. 
She has been begging almost since she could talk to learn violin.
I hope the desire doesn't wear off for a long time to come.
This was Isabelle saying "I LOVE school!"
And I didn't even have to tell her to say it, so you know it's heartfelt.
This violin is so tiny.  It looks like a doll toy.  

Isabelle loves to learn...
regardless of location!

Of course William has his hobbies too.
Mostly it consists of helping out and causing trouble all at the same time.
I didn't realize until I had William the the actual purpose of  handles on the drawers is for climbing.
We should have named him tough monkey.

Today was a very exciting day.
I love "first" days!